Loved the update! There was one inconsistency where I picked the choice to write in the journal often but then in the bath got the line that the water was more calming than writing in the journal because I didn't write in it often. One thing I would really love is to give us a light mode option back. For those of us with astigmatism, reading white letters on a black background can actually damage our eyesight more. Other than that it was fantastic and I can't wait for more!
Hello! I am glad you enjoyed it. 💗 Due to popular demand, light mode is back! It does start with dark mode so everyone will have to go to the settings and switch it. ^^ I'll take a look at that bath time bug later. :)
Hi, was curious to play this game but wanted to know if timed events would be announced before you make them/ have a count down timer? I just get so stressed during timed events haha
Im totally not checking every hour to see if the glorious public release of chapter 3 happens, noooo why would I do such thing ( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE)
I remember playing this game when the first chapter came out and it instantly hooked me but I decided to put it down and give it some time just so I don't get sad when I finish the story so quickly, I completely forgot this game existed and always called it in my mind the crown game 😅🤣 and finally I randomly found it today while browsing through some IF's reccomendations and the fact that chapter 3 is coming out in a mere few days has me hyped,so I will patiently wait until it comes out before diving into this world again,I don't think I can handle waiting any longer.
The story and the plot itself are so amazing 😭. I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter... I'm literally thinking about this every time I touch my phone and check if a new chapter has been updated... Author you're doing a breathtaking job in this...
Really love this story; thank you for sharing with us. You're a wonderfully talented author. This is definitely one of the stories I check constantly for updates. I'm so excited for the next chapter!
No, it isn't dropped! My last devlog was in september (check it out if you haven't read the short stories yet!) and since 2024 did just start, I have only been quiet on here for 3-4 months LOL.
Love this story and look foward to the next Chapters! Really hope we get the option to have Luceris face the monter he made! Would love the option to remove Vincent's miserable head from his wretched, brooding, shoulders.
I must say I found it a bit ridiculous when Luceris made our 9-year-old MC the new queen simply out of revenge against their sister. Considering that a child with no family in an enemy country really doesn't have the right to say "no", the story development actually makes sense, but things still frustrate me a little when there's a refuse option here and it doesn't really make sense.
I hate this sick king, yes, and can't wait for revenge :) looking forward to the updates and seeing what good stories you bring us!
I read again because so good :O and I don't want vengeance well I think best way to go live as best you can and rub it in their face because your better than them and you will not go down that route like they did :D >.> and my guy to be in love with the kings son :D
Shipping them both has me giggling and crying. The angst of it all. MC's jaded personality in contrast with his optimistic one. Has me wanting to crawl into the covers and die T_T
If I had some money in the bank, I would seriously tip you for 10$. I loved your story, I loved your characters. I came from choices and signed up just to wait for this story to be updated. and I'm looking forward to it.🥰😍
All I want is to go back to my country and, hopefully, rebuild or at the very least live there anonymously for a time then travel the world. Basically leaving this enemy country is my revenge+healing. I want the king or "Emperor" or whatever to live (but I feel like he'd have to die for me to leave his country) so he suffers to his death with the same unquenchable love. I'm utterly cold to anyone who has anything to do with the fall of my country, except for that one soldier who fed me non-stop. Courteous, cautiously, with Lancelot and people who show favorability to me but that's where I draw the line. I know they are good people, but I hate them (Yet, somehow, my stats show that I'm "Charming". Interesting, I suppose not being rude helps. Also, I feel so sad, the 9 yo I played was so mature it was unsettling but that's life for ya.) I want to leave this place. Use the knowledge they give me while training to be a royal consort to further my older brother's research if possible and don't look back. If nothing else I could make a living with my "royal" IQ, right? xD
Omg, This has become my new favorite IF. Its such an amazing story and the writing is spectacular. It got me so emotional ToT. The need for VENGEANCE is strong. Can't wait to see what the story has in store!
Also hope Luceris enjoys the gift. Totally felt satisfying 😌
I LOVE THIS GAME!! The entire game got me feeling emotions so strong I started weeping in my dad's office in front of his co-workers so that was an experience! I love how you write emotions— especially anger and grief.
1. King Luceris, I will make you perish in a heart beat and watch as the life BLEEDS from your eyes with bliss. It is on SIGHT.
Romance be dammed (just kidding, literally in love with Hunter he's so sweet omgg)
2. Vincent- shut up yo ass up, everytime he (or any other ignorant *ssh*les) starts talking sh*t I feel a needle poking mockingly at my brain and it makes me yearn for sweet scrumptious revenge.
3. Fadiya's great— I wanna give her a hug and a kiss on the forehead (—3—)💕 (platonically)
4. Lancelot kinda made me angry but I decided to warm up to him so MC doesn't have a short number of people to seek comfort and safety from. Though, Lancelot won't technically be enough to replace MC's former dad, I still wanna see MC and Lancelot having a father/child dynamic. He's a chill guy:D
Questions- do we get more Lancelot lore?👀 and do we get the option to be a little shit and and fuck around just to give Vincent an aneurysm cuz I'm pretty like that? >:)
You will get more Lancelot lore in forms of side stories (that will be on a different file so not this page) and in his codex page which will come with Chapter 3!
And yes, you will get plenty of chances to fuck around. 😉
The feeling of having your entire life taken from you, and having the chance to do it unto others....will I crave vengeance, or walk the higher road? or Will I pick both!?
I love it~ Thanks for the hard work, you can really feel the emotions of the characters, I like that there are options to give in to the urge of vengeance, but then backing off and being rational, really well written~
THIS IS SO SAD AND AND MY HEART BROKE INTO PIECES. I'm so glad there an option to fight back/revenge. That it, I'm gonna play revenge route first to revenge for her family dead before romancing ToT
Damn it was bloody brilliant. Great demo, was sad for MC but glad she gets to fight back. Can't wait for more. Oh quick question, will the king be a RO/LI?
Luceris is not an RO, the situation would be frankly distasteful as he is more than 20 years older than MC at the beginning, killed their family, and kidnapped them.
I wondered about that, too. The romanceable characters are only starting to get more room in the story at the current end of the demo - which isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong :) But yeah, I had the impression of Luceris being like a secret RO, too 😅 Simply cause their interactions are many plus pretty intense and I guess thats the reason Luceris tends to leave a heavier impression at the moment 😊
This is absolutely one of my all time favorite games to come back to. Little changes I make through each playthrough shift my gameplay and it's always a new experience; I adore it! Keep up the amazing work, man, this is top tier work !! much love from the South 💕
i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
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Loved the update! There was one inconsistency where I picked the choice to write in the journal often but then in the bath got the line that the water was more calming than writing in the journal because I didn't write in it often. One thing I would really love is to give us a light mode option back. For those of us with astigmatism, reading white letters on a black background can actually damage our eyesight more. Other than that it was fantastic and I can't wait for more!
Hello! I am glad you enjoyed it. 💗 Due to popular demand, light mode is back! It does start with dark mode so everyone will have to go to the settings and switch it. ^^ I'll take a look at that bath time bug later. :)
Oooooh 😍 loving this update so much!
I love this game so much, the worldbuilding lives rent free in my mind. Thank you SO much author for this gift to all IF's enjoyers💕💕💕💕💕
me waking up after a 10 hours nap, instantly turning my phone on FOR THIS GLORIOUS MOMENT, HELL YEAH.
Hi, was curious to play this game but wanted to know if timed events would be announced before you make them/ have a count down timer? I just get so stressed during timed events haha
Currently the demo doesn't have timed events! When I add it I'll put a setting to turn timed choices off. ^^
Okay, thank you for the reply!
This chapter ate, I like really try to be forgiving and kind, but um no Luceris needs to burn in the pit of hell.
Thank you so much for uploading <3
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it. 💗
AAA IM SO HYPED :DD
Im totally not checking every hour to see if the glorious public release of chapter 3 happens, noooo why would I do such thing ( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE)
It will be in around 4 hours! Still a bit to go. 🫣
me too xD ever since i woke up , worked till now at 21:05 (gmt+9) hahaha I’m very excited
I remember playing this game when the first chapter came out and it instantly hooked me but I decided to put it down and give it some time just so I don't get sad when I finish the story so quickly, I completely forgot this game existed and always called it in my mind the crown game 😅🤣 and finally I randomly found it today while browsing through some IF's reccomendations and the fact that chapter 3 is coming out in a mere few days has me hyped,so I will patiently wait until it comes out before diving into this world again,I don't think I can handle waiting any longer.
The story and the plot itself are so amazing 😭. I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter... I'm literally thinking about this every time I touch my phone and check if a new chapter has been updated... Author you're doing a breathtaking job in this...
Thank you so much 💗 Just 4 days to go until public release! 🥳
Really love this story; thank you for sharing with us. You're a wonderfully talented author. This is definitely one of the stories I check constantly for updates. I'm so excited for the next chapter!
Is the game dropped since no new update From 2023 to 2024? 🥲🥲 plzz don't
No, it isn't dropped! My last devlog was in september (check it out if you haven't read the short stories yet!) and since 2024 did just start, I have only been quiet on here for 3-4 months LOL.
Chapter 3 will be coming in February. 😉
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I think setting the room on fire is the best ending tbh, it was very epic
idk how to find em on ko-fi. I log in and when I search for their name, it doesn't pop up.
Hey! their Ko-Fi link is in the game's description as well but here it is :
https://ko-fi.com/coeluvr
thanks
a gut wrenching IF that I hope the Author is proud of because its so good and its not even done!
Love this story and look foward to the next Chapters! Really hope we get the option to have Luceris face the monter he made! Would love the option to remove Vincent's miserable head from his wretched, brooding, shoulders.
omgg i love this
VINCENT HAS MY HEARTTT IDK BRO SUM ABT HIMMM
I must say I found it a bit ridiculous when Luceris made our 9-year-old MC the new queen simply out of revenge against their sister. Considering that a child with no family in an enemy country really doesn't have the right to say "no", the story development actually makes sense, but things still frustrate me a little when there's a refuse option here and it doesn't really make sense.
I hate this sick king, yes, and can't wait for revenge :) looking forward to the updates and seeing what good stories you bring us!
I read again because so good :O and I don't want vengeance well I think best way to go live as best you can and rub it in their face because your better than them and you will not go down that route like they did :D >.> and my guy to be in love with the kings son :D
Shipping them both has me giggling and crying. The angst of it all. MC's jaded personality in contrast with his optimistic one. Has me wanting to crawl into the covers and die T_T
Right DX but I just want to be kind and cuddle him and not let go lol
If I had some money in the bank, I would seriously tip you for 10$. I loved your story, I loved your characters. I came from choices and signed up just to wait for this story to be updated. and I'm looking forward to it.🥰😍
All I want is to go back to my country and, hopefully, rebuild or at the very least live there anonymously for a time then travel the world. Basically leaving this enemy country is my revenge+healing. I want the king or "Emperor" or whatever to live (but I feel like he'd have to die for me to leave his country) so he suffers to his death with the same unquenchable love.
I'm utterly cold to anyone who has anything to do with the fall of my country, except for that one soldier who fed me non-stop. Courteous, cautiously, with Lancelot and people who show favorability to me but that's where I draw the line. I know they are good people, but I hate them (Yet, somehow, my stats show that I'm "Charming". Interesting, I suppose not being rude helps. Also, I feel so sad, the 9 yo I played was so mature it was unsettling but that's life for ya.)
I want to leave this place. Use the knowledge they give me while training to be a royal consort to further my older brother's research if possible and don't look back. If nothing else I could make a living with my "royal" IQ, right? xD
Omg, This has become my new favorite IF. Its such an amazing story and the writing is spectacular. It got me so emotional ToT. The need for VENGEANCE is strong. Can't wait to see what the story has in store!
Also hope Luceris enjoys the gift. Totally felt satisfying 😌
I LOVE THIS GAME!! The entire game got me feeling emotions so strong I started weeping in my dad's office in front of his co-workers so that was an experience! I love how you write emotions— especially anger and grief.
1. King Luceris, I will make you perish in a heart beat and watch as the life BLEEDS from your eyes with bliss. It is on SIGHT.
Romance be dammed (just kidding, literally in love with Hunter he's so sweet omgg)
2. Vincent- shut up yo ass up, everytime he (or any other ignorant *ssh*les) starts talking sh*t I feel a needle poking mockingly at my brain and it makes me yearn for sweet scrumptious revenge.
3. Fadiya's great— I wanna give her a hug and a kiss on the forehead (—3—)💕 (platonically)
4. Lancelot kinda made me angry but I decided to warm up to him so MC doesn't have a short number of people to seek comfort and safety from. Though, Lancelot won't technically be enough to replace MC's former dad, I still wanna see MC and Lancelot having a father/child dynamic. He's a chill guy:D
Questions- do we get more Lancelot lore?👀 and do we get the option to be a little shit and and fuck around just to give Vincent an aneurysm cuz I'm pretty like that? >:)
Anyways have a good day!^^
Thank you so much for your kind words! 💗
You will get more Lancelot lore in forms of side stories (that will be on a different file so not this page) and in his codex page which will come with Chapter 3!
And yes, you will get plenty of chances to fuck around. 😉
I hope you have a good day as well! 💗
The feeling of having your entire life taken from you, and having the chance to do it unto others....will I crave vengeance, or walk the higher road? or Will I pick both!?
I love it~ Thanks for the hard work, you can really feel the emotions of the characters, I like that there are options to give in to the urge of vengeance, but then backing off and being rational, really well written~
Can't wait for more!
I'm literally crying at 3 am rn.
THIS IS SO SAD AND AND MY HEART BROKE INTO PIECES. I'm so glad there an option to fight back/revenge. That it, I'm gonna play revenge route first to revenge for her family dead before romancing ToT
This is so good! I love this soo much! one question, will there be a love triangle? (I'm kind of into those things)
Thank you! 💗 A love triangle isn't in the plans.
Damn it was bloody brilliant. Great demo, was sad for MC but glad she gets to fight back. Can't wait for more. Oh quick question, will the king be a RO/LI?
Thank you! 💗
Luceris is not an RO, the situation would be frankly distasteful as he is more than 20 years older than MC at the beginning, killed their family, and kidnapped them.
Good to know. I was just curious.
I wondered about that, too. The romanceable characters are only starting to get more room in the story at the current end of the demo - which isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong :) But yeah, I had the impression of Luceris being like a secret RO, too 😅 Simply cause their interactions are many plus pretty intense and I guess thats the reason Luceris tends to leave a heavier impression at the moment 😊
This is absolutely one of my all time favorite games to come back to. Little changes I make through each playthrough shift my gameplay and it's always a new experience; I adore it! Keep up the amazing work, man, this is top tier work !! much love from the South 💕
Thank you so much! 💗
i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Dae! Thank you for your kind words. 🥹💗
Happy New Year Luceris!!
“Happy new year, Your Majesty~”
a song to my ears... i want TO bURN it aLL
chapter 2 doesn't exist for me even though i've updated :(
Did you make a new save, as in restart from the beginning? If you didn't then you should since the old saves don't work.
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
It's okay, I don't need my heart anyway 🥹 BUT AAAA I REALLY HOPE MC WILL BE HAPPY 😭
Hopefully someday they'll be happy! 💗
Loved the new chapter! Following you on Tumblr and can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing with us 💕
So happy you enjoyed the new chapter, thank you for your support! 💗
looks like i found my new obsession :p its soooo good, i feel blessed to be able to read this haha
Aaa thank you! Glad to be the source of your entertainment. 💗
Hey, so I am liking the story style. Would it be okay if I used it for mine? I am terrible at coding things like css and yours is gorgeou
Sure! Just don't do the same colors please :)
Awesome, thanks bunches!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It ended D: IT was so good I love it! I want to hug the mc and tell them it will get better I just want them to be happy Q,Q
Thank you! MC truly deserves better :(
They really do D: *hugs mc*
This is a pure gem, i love it! I can't wait for the next chapters!
Thank you!