Just finished the demo! I'm super intrigued and look forward to an update. MC's family seemed so fleshed out and I would love if we could flashback to them and know more about MC's sister! Though, I wonder what the purpose was for making MC a 6 year old? It seems as if you could still get the same effect of dark things happening to a child if MC was older, like 12, 13, 14 and it would also make more sense considering MC's dialogue choices and thought processes seem far more mature than the age they are portrayed as. Royalty or not, I don't know how eloquent a six year old could be in this situation. I really look forward to your next updates!
I have updated the demo with some wording changes and some more options. Let me know if you still think MC seems too mature for their age, would love to hear your thoughts!
Your writing is incredibly lovely ✨ and moving. The plot is really quite incredible.
Please tell me that MC's sweet brother Alistair is still alive and shows up in the future wearing the necklace. He deserves better 😭
Luceris deserves some applause🔪😒 for elevating a 6-year-old child to the position of royal consort. I know it has just started but he already managed to get on my nerves 😂💀 ...that also proves your excellent writing skills!
Apart from that, the ROs appear to be quite promising ❤️ can't wait to spend more time with them! ( I already like some of them 💀, sry I get attached really easily...ik that's bad )
I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
I appreciate you so much for making this masterpiece 💗
The story is quite dark and sad. It really makes you pity the protagonist. That being said, I enjoyed the game a lot, so well done! <3
Since the Vesphire bloodline is connected to the Gods and magic, will using magic be an option for the protagonist in the future? Might be asking the obvious but I really wanna know lol
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Just finished the demo! I'm super intrigued and look forward to an update. MC's family seemed so fleshed out and I would love if we could flashback to them and know more about MC's sister! Though, I wonder what the purpose was for making MC a 6 year old? It seems as if you could still get the same effect of dark things happening to a child if MC was older, like 12, 13, 14 and it would also make more sense considering MC's dialogue choices and thought processes seem far more mature than the age they are portrayed as. Royalty or not, I don't know how eloquent a six year old could be in this situation. I really look forward to your next updates!
Hello! Thank you so much 💗
I have updated the demo with some wording changes and some more options. Let me know if you still think MC seems too mature for their age, would love to hear your thoughts!
Oh how I do love a good revenge story. :)
Your writing is incredibly lovely ✨ and moving. The plot is really quite incredible.
Please tell me that MC's sweet brother Alistair is still alive and shows up in the future wearing the necklace. He deserves better 😭
Luceris deserves some applause🔪😒 for elevating a 6-year-old child to the position of royal consort. I know it has just started but he already managed to get on my nerves 😂💀 ...that also proves your excellent writing skills!
Apart from that, the ROs appear to be quite promising ❤️ can't wait to spend more time with them! ( I already like some of them 💀, sry I get attached really easily...ik that's bad )
I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
I appreciate you so much for making this masterpiece 💗
Thank you so much!! 💗💗 Luceris really out here making everything worse 😂😂 I'm glad you like the characters (I'm like that too it's okay).
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The story is quite dark and sad. It really makes you pity the protagonist. That being said, I enjoyed the game a lot, so well done! <3
Since the Vesphire bloodline is connected to the Gods and magic, will using magic be an option for the protagonist in the future? Might be asking the obvious but I really wanna know lol
Thank you so much! 💗 I'd love to answer that but it is kind of spoilerish so let's leave it at maybe or maybe not ✨️