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when will it be updated, i miss Hunter

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FYI guys this isn't abandoned! Tumblr says there's a rewrite in progress

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ok thank you owo

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Literally almost sobbing. Amazing descriptions, amazing characters, it's beautiful


Also, screw you, Hunter, why'd you have to do that to me? I should have stuck with my gut about you and switched to someone else

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PLEASE UPDATE!! PLS!! I LOVE TO PLAY CHAPTER 5T_T_T^3^^3

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i lied to the game about my personality am i still manipulative

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don't worry, you're not the only one

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I'm also curious what other peoples mc's are like...

I'll go first:

Name: Aza De Vesphire

Pronouns: He/Him

Appearance: hip-length, wavy, deep-pink hair | ivory skin | crimson eyes (obvi)

Personality: Passive, cautious, charming, expressive, honest, kind, outgoing, peaceful

Edit: I'm also romancing Hunter (you can include your romance option if you want to)

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Name: Cerise De Vesphire

Pronouns: she/her

Appearance: short, curly, grey hair | light brown skin | crimson eyes

Personality: assertive, cautious, blunt, expressive, manipulative, kind, reserved, and vengeful :3

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Name: Aiden De Vesphire

Pronouns: He/Him

Appearance: Shoulder-length, wavy, deep blue hair | Ivory skin | Crimson eyes

Personality: Assertive, Adventurous, Charming, Composed, Honest, Kind, Reserved, and Peaceful.

Romance: whoever decides they actually like me first 😭. (So far, hunters got him a girl, helios is upset for some reason and sorta still feels uncomfortable around MC, Vincent hates us, and I hate him for the inn scene, so rude of him to interrupt, soarine sees my character meerly as a friend, and fadiya, well, I may or may not put her in the friendzone, depends if everyone still hates me.)

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Oh wait our characters are alike 🫣 (by appearance + personality) Twins 🤝 

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Cool! Twins🤝

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Gotta replay but once i do I'll update this


Name: 


Pronouns:


Appearance:


Personality:


Romancing: Can already say this, since I'll have more saves it's Fadiya, Soarine and Hunter

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I really hope Clarence and Alistair (maybe Catalina too) are alive😭, I cannot be seen as delulu.

Also, I LOVE HUNTER (so sad I got friend zoned waaaaa)

I also have another delulu theory. What if we (the mc), Helios, Soarine and the prince/princess fro the other kingdom, all kinda become the gods yk. And we got suuuuuuuuuppppppperrrrrrrrrrr op powers. It would be crazy if that did happen...

Sadly the creator confirmed they're both dead

**absolutely devastated** 😫

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I love Hunter so much but oh how they make me suffer TT ♡


But on a side note, I've noticed some errors in the descriptions for them (Hunter), I have him set as male but if I remember right sometimes it uses she/her pronouns? I don't know if it's intentional or not. I may also be misremembering tho

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Please tell me we will be able to kill the king

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WHA-, ehem, i mean, what!? Why? To be fair, he makes lancelot (my all time favorite character, i get sad when the game doesn't talk about him) happy, and hes honestly taken us under his wing and kinda sorta treats us like an offbrand son. I also joke with him and love his humor too. But, your opinion is your own, and yes i can understand why you hate him.

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I mean, yeah he kinda treats us like his child, but he also burned down our palace with us inside, killing our entire family and would have happily killed us too if not for Lancelot, but I see where you're coming from

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He killed a whole family, dismembered the corpses of two young diplomats (the princes) and propicied the death of thousands of persons (with families) out of the rage of losing his wife.

As you can see in the prologue, he wanted to kill the mc too, nevertheless he had a reason for keeping him alive

I'm starting to think I'm the the only one whi sees the king as a good character

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Tell me you're not going to leave this incredible story in limbo. Many months have passed and now I'm afraid it's like other incredible IFs that have been abandoned 😭. Leaving that aside, what an interesting and engaging story, hoping it continues.

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I think that it's still being updated? I mean, the author is pretty active on tumblr... but last I remember, there was some sort of rewrite going on of the previous chapters

On the creators Tumblr they stated that it's currently getting a rewrite

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I LOVE FADIYA AND HUNTER AND VINCENT BUT MOSTLY FADIYA

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Thank you, for you have blessed us with this amazing game (I barely started)

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just finished and i need the next chapter T^T

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HOW DO I GET VINCENT TO LOVE ME😭😭😭😭

(THIS IS SOO GOOD)

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i'm assuming his route is going to be more of a slow burn style. he was raised to hate the MC, he wouldn't just forget all of that if you bat your eyes at him

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i know it's naive, but is there really no chance our twin might be alive?

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Spoiler alert!!


It's technically possible because we never saw his body and Lancelot tries to stop Luceris from killing MC by stating that they're a child, which wouldn't make sense if he'd already killed MC's twin beforehand. Then again it's unlikely Alistair survived the fire. Maybe he's some kind of spirit? It's possible since there are gods and magic and the fact that we hear his voice in the story but probably not.

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The writing for this is so amazing omg!! I totally binged the whole thing and am left desperately craving for more 😭 hunter and helios are so <33

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I love vincent and hunter so much omggg I crave more content of them

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Just finished all the chapters... being friendzoned by Hunter is quite something lmao, I love him

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i swear i've been looking through these comments for so long,, how is no one talking about hunter ???????? literally was my first choice with no questions asked. so far, i've seen ONE person talk about hunter and how they friend-zone the MC (which was absolutely devastating i wanted to die when it happened) but sigh i'm so ready for this slow-burn hehehe

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I honestly love you for talking about them

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Tbh if i replayed the if and then made a comment about Hunter it would be way too long

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Your talking about hunter not getting attention, what about helios? I mean, i do like hunter, but my opinion on him wavers due to him ditching the mc and hanging with helios and vincent, but helios is so kind and sweet. (Btw, vincent is an a** due to the inn incident, still mad).

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bro i totally understand but helios is literally the most popular RO from my observations (˘ŏ_ŏ) (also i agree with u 100% on vincent hehe) i dont really get the hype about helios though... like yeah hes sweet and all but how am i gonna go ahead and like the dude whose father killed my family.... it might just be me not picking any options that would lead to more interactions with him but from what i experienced in my playthroughs, he just wasnt all that interesting to me ¯\_ (ᵕ—ᴗ—)_/¯

yeah, he is favored but he kinda doesn't like me based on the relationship scale, so I want to get his up because I'm honestly trying to win everyone, except Vincent, over. I also kinda have a very unpopular opinion, luceris is a good character.

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Does anyone know if this will be updated? 

I'm scared this will end like "Scout" seeing the last update was 2024.

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The author seems to have been gone for a few months, but is back now. From what I found on her tumblr, she's working on rewrites now

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Heck, just finished my first playthrough and idk what I'd do if she wasn't still working on the game.

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omg i love this so much! the writing is superb, the characters are well-written and it really does immerse you in the story and make you feel what the characters must be feeling. 

one thing i will say tho is that chapter one kind of frustrated me; I wanted more choice to be angrier at all of them 😭 MC was too nice and didn't lash out enough imo. i definitely would've reacted very differently if i was forced to be in close proximity with the same people who killed my family at nine years old. 

but that's just me and i loved the story either way. can't wait for the next update!

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it's been so long since the last update... I miss Vincent and helios...

:(

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This is so well written, I love this sm..

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All of the characters are quite charming, really. They feel natural and are well written. Though I guess I'll go with Helios' route, just because I like how messy (given the MC's situation) the relationship would be.

Aside from that, the whole seperating sexual desire from romantic route is such a great touch I don't see in many games. And the whole "unhealthy coping mechanism" choices are really interesting. One of my favorite IFs definitely.

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Holy crap this is absolutely phenomenal.


Plan: Continue to get to know Fadiya better, master magic (and then weapons), eventually kill Luceris and/or Catilina, depends on how the scenario played out, but one of them WILL die. Also want to get my kingdom back.

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I reread it cuz I got bored, cried like a baby, regret being bored and my hatred reignited, I can't wait to hurt LuciBaby

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