This is a really fun chilled game to play. Its like reading a book and making your own story..LOL. The amount of detail and thought that went into it was amazing. If I may suggest if you could add a voice over of some sort for those who maybe don't like reading. But if not its perfect the way it is Great Job!! :D
I just got done playing the first chapter and I have got to say that this is really good and I'm ready for the next chapter.
A side note though, I'm not sure if she's just too mature for a 6 year old or what, but some of the dialogue she says sounds like she's about 14 or so.
I have changed the age from 6 to 9 due to how mature MC seems, it is stated in the story that they are more mature than usual kids but I agree it is too much for a 6 year old so it is 9 now!
I am in tears :,,,,,,,,D, I've only played the prologue so far and I fear the state of my mental health as I continue to play, it's v good so far though! I'm looking forward to playing more!
Although I now have a lot on my mind, there are so many possibilities and ideas developing in my mind, including the MC's older siblings, the necklace, king's true motivation and potential narrative twists ✨, I read this masterpiece again, and gosh is it still as great as ever 💗.
Even though it's only the beginning, I'm already so intrigued by what I'm seeing~
Your story was so great! 🥲 (made me feel so much sadness for MC.)
I thought I would hate Luceris more because he killed MC's family, but I hate MC's sister more for dragging the whole family down for a position.
Also, I think the necklace mc was gifted by their brother is already working because after refusing twice to Luceris offer, I think mc either saw a vision of the future of their death at the cell or got back to before mc refused the offer after mc died then we go back to scene before with a headache this time. If so that some really good foreshadowing of the necklace power and maybe Alistair could be still alive because of the necklace? (I hope so)
Your writing is incredibly to the point it's getting me to think a really hard on the plot. Though I wish for a mc who would want to die do more risky actions to purposely to just die, the reason I even refuse twice was because of that. And if the necklace really has that ability to basically not let mc die then I would expect a mc who wants death to hate that ability maybe? (I'm thinking too hard 😅 I'm sorry.)
Anyways I can't wait for the progression of this lovely piece of work ~💖
i rejected him out of spite😌 im sad this is not a path we can choose because it's kinda sick ngl. aren't we 9?💀
and tbh i also wish for an mc who wants to die just to lay the message "whatever your scheme is, fck you and you will not use me for it"
oh and about your necklace theory, idk i don't think it work like that. it may be that we just hit a bad ending and rewind to the last checkpoint, because mc didn't mention about it. but u may be right about foreshadowing
Just finished the demo! I'm super intrigued and look forward to an update. MC's family seemed so fleshed out and I would love if we could flashback to them and know more about MC's sister! Though, I wonder what the purpose was for making MC a 6 year old? It seems as if you could still get the same effect of dark things happening to a child if MC was older, like 12, 13, 14 and it would also make more sense considering MC's dialogue choices and thought processes seem far more mature than the age they are portrayed as. Royalty or not, I don't know how eloquent a six year old could be in this situation. I really look forward to your next updates!
I have updated the demo with some wording changes and some more options. Let me know if you still think MC seems too mature for their age, would love to hear your thoughts!
Your writing is incredibly lovely ✨ and moving. The plot is really quite incredible.
Please tell me that MC's sweet brother Alistair is still alive and shows up in the future wearing the necklace. He deserves better 😭
Luceris deserves some applause🔪😒 for elevating a 6-year-old child to the position of royal consort. I know it has just started but he already managed to get on my nerves 😂💀 ...that also proves your excellent writing skills!
Apart from that, the ROs appear to be quite promising ❤️ can't wait to spend more time with them! ( I already like some of them 💀, sry I get attached really easily...ik that's bad )
I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
I appreciate you so much for making this masterpiece 💗
The story is quite dark and sad. It really makes you pity the protagonist. That being said, I enjoyed the game a lot, so well done! <3
Since the Vesphire bloodline is connected to the Gods and magic, will using magic be an option for the protagonist in the future? Might be asking the obvious but I really wanna know lol
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the king is so creepy bro- like the mc's a whole child they're even younger than his own son!!! D:
but the pure anger and discomfort that I feel towards the king just goes to show how good your writing is
Thank you! 💗
No but highkey tho the king is hella creepy like the fuck he doin marrying a 9 year old 🧐
This is a really fun chilled game to play. Its like reading a book and making your own story..LOL. The amount of detail and thought that went into it was amazing. If I may suggest if you could add a voice over of some sort for those who maybe don't like reading. But if not its perfect the way it is Great Job!! :D
My heart was filled with joy then literally burned, i love it im excited for more+*
I just got done playing the first chapter and I have got to say that this is really good and I'm ready for the next chapter.
A side note though, I'm not sure if she's just too mature for a 6 year old or what, but some of the dialogue she says sounds like she's about 14 or so.
Other than that, I really did enjoy this!
Hello! I am glad you enjoyed it. 💗
I have changed the age from 6 to 9 due to how mature MC seems, it is stated in the story that they are more mature than usual kids but I agree it is too much for a 6 year old so it is 9 now!
Oh okay! I guess the age didn't update in the profile settings. It still showed 6 years old in that while I was playing. But 9 sounds better! :)
You will have to replay it for it to show up as nine! It won't matter in the future chapters though since it'll be a timeskip.
This story is really good, very dark and dramatic. Also, the MC has got to be the most intelligent 6-year-old ever-
I am in tears :,,,,,,,,D, I've only played the prologue so far and I fear the state of my mental health as I continue to play, it's v good so far though! I'm looking forward to playing more!
Although I now have a lot on my mind, there are so many possibilities and ideas developing in my mind, including the MC's older siblings, the necklace, king's true motivation and potential narrative twists ✨, I read this masterpiece again, and gosh is it still as great as ever 💗.
Even though it's only the beginning, I'm already so intrigued by what I'm seeing~
Your story was so great! 🥲 (made me feel so much sadness for MC.)
I thought I would hate Luceris more because he killed MC's family, but I hate MC's sister more for dragging the whole family down for a position.
Also, I think the necklace mc was gifted by their brother is already working because after refusing twice to Luceris offer, I think mc either saw a vision of the future of their death at the cell or got back to before mc refused the offer after mc died then we go back to scene before with a headache this time. If so that some really good foreshadowing of the necklace power and maybe Alistair could be still alive because of the necklace? (I hope so)
Your writing is incredibly to the point it's getting me to think a really hard on the plot. Though I wish for a mc who would want to die do more risky actions to purposely to just die, the reason I even refuse twice was because of that. And if the necklace really has that ability to basically not let mc die then I would expect a mc who wants death to hate that ability maybe? (I'm thinking too hard 😅 I'm sorry.)
Anyways I can't wait for the progression of this lovely piece of work ~💖
Hey!
I like your necklace-related theory and .......I also rejected that tyrant's offer twice 😂...just like how he deserves🫡.
i rejected him out of spite😌 im sad this is not a path we can choose because it's kinda sick ngl. aren't we 9?💀
and tbh i also wish for an mc who wants to die just to lay the message "whatever your scheme is, fck you and you will not use me for it"
oh and about your necklace theory, idk i don't think it work like that. it may be that we just hit a bad ending and rewind to the last checkpoint, because mc didn't mention about it. but u may be right about foreshadowing
Just finished the demo! I'm super intrigued and look forward to an update. MC's family seemed so fleshed out and I would love if we could flashback to them and know more about MC's sister! Though, I wonder what the purpose was for making MC a 6 year old? It seems as if you could still get the same effect of dark things happening to a child if MC was older, like 12, 13, 14 and it would also make more sense considering MC's dialogue choices and thought processes seem far more mature than the age they are portrayed as. Royalty or not, I don't know how eloquent a six year old could be in this situation. I really look forward to your next updates!
Hello! Thank you so much 💗
I have updated the demo with some wording changes and some more options. Let me know if you still think MC seems too mature for their age, would love to hear your thoughts!
Oh how I do love a good revenge story. :)
Your writing is incredibly lovely ✨ and moving. The plot is really quite incredible.
Please tell me that MC's sweet brother Alistair is still alive and shows up in the future wearing the necklace. He deserves better 😭
Luceris deserves some applause🔪😒 for elevating a 6-year-old child to the position of royal consort. I know it has just started but he already managed to get on my nerves 😂💀 ...that also proves your excellent writing skills!
Apart from that, the ROs appear to be quite promising ❤️ can't wait to spend more time with them! ( I already like some of them 💀, sry I get attached really easily...ik that's bad )
I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
I appreciate you so much for making this masterpiece 💗
Thank you so much!! 💗💗 Luceris really out here making everything worse 😂😂 I'm glad you like the characters (I'm like that too it's okay).
❤️ 🙈
The story is quite dark and sad. It really makes you pity the protagonist. That being said, I enjoyed the game a lot, so well done! <3
Since the Vesphire bloodline is connected to the Gods and magic, will using magic be an option for the protagonist in the future? Might be asking the obvious but I really wanna know lol
Thank you so much! 💗 I'd love to answer that but it is kind of spoilerish so let's leave it at maybe or maybe not ✨️