I must say I found it a bit ridiculous when Luceris made our 9-year-old MC the new queen simply out of revenge against their sister. Considering that a child with no family in an enemy country really doesn't have the right to say "no", the story development actually makes sense, but things still frustrate me a little when there's a refuse option here and it doesn't really make sense.
I hate this sick king, yes, and can't wait for revenge :) looking forward to the updates and seeing what good stories you bring us!
I read again because so good :O and I don't want vengeance well I think best way to go live as best you can and rub it in their face because your better than them and you will not go down that route like they did :D >.> and my guy to be in love with the kings son :D
Shipping them both has me giggling and crying. The angst of it all. MC's jaded personality in contrast with his optimistic one. Has me wanting to crawl into the covers and die T_T
If I had some money in the bank, I would seriously tip you for 10$. I loved your story, I loved your characters. I came from choices and signed up just to wait for this story to be updated. and I'm looking forward to it.🥰😍
All I want is to go back to my country and, hopefully, rebuild or at the very least live there anonymously for a time then travel the world. Basically leaving this enemy country is my revenge+healing. I want the king or "Emperor" or whatever to live (but I feel like he'd have to die for me to leave his country) so he suffers to his death with the same unquenchable love. I'm utterly cold to anyone who has anything to do with the fall of my country, except for that one soldier who fed me non-stop. Courteous, cautiously, with Lancelot and people who show favorability to me but that's where I draw the line. I know they are good people, but I hate them (Yet, somehow, my stats show that I'm "Charming". Interesting, I suppose not being rude helps. Also, I feel so sad, the 9 yo I played was so mature it was unsettling but that's life for ya.) I want to leave this place. Use the knowledge they give me while training to be a royal consort to further my older brother's research if possible and don't look back. If nothing else I could make a living with my "royal" IQ, right? xD
Omg, This has become my new favorite IF. Its such an amazing story and the writing is spectacular. It got me so emotional ToT. The need for VENGEANCE is strong. Can't wait to see what the story has in store!
Also hope Luceris enjoys the gift. Totally felt satisfying 😌
I LOVE THIS GAME!! The entire game got me feeling emotions so strong I started weeping in my dad's office in front of his co-workers so that was an experience! I love how you write emotions— especially anger and grief.
1. King Luceris, I will make you perish in a heart beat and watch as the life BLEEDS from your eyes with bliss. It is on SIGHT.
Romance be dammed (just kidding, literally in love with Hunter he's so sweet omgg)
2. Vincent- shut up yo ass up, everytime he (or any other ignorant *ssh*les) starts talking sh*t I feel a needle poking mockingly at my brain and it makes me yearn for sweet scrumptious revenge.
3. Fadiya's great— I wanna give her a hug and a kiss on the forehead (—3—)💕 (platonically)
4. Lancelot kinda made me angry but I decided to warm up to him so MC doesn't have a short number of people to seek comfort and safety from. Though, Lancelot won't technically be enough to replace MC's former dad, I still wanna see MC and Lancelot having a father/child dynamic. He's a chill guy:D
Questions- do we get more Lancelot lore?👀 and do we get the option to be a little shit and and fuck around just to give Vincent an aneurysm cuz I'm pretty like that? >:)
You will get more Lancelot lore in forms of side stories (that will be on a different file so not this page) and in his codex page which will come with Chapter 3!
And yes, you will get plenty of chances to fuck around. 😉
The feeling of having your entire life taken from you, and having the chance to do it unto others....will I crave vengeance, or walk the higher road? or Will I pick both!?
I love it~ Thanks for the hard work, you can really feel the emotions of the characters, I like that there are options to give in to the urge of vengeance, but then backing off and being rational, really well written~
THIS IS SO SAD AND AND MY HEART BROKE INTO PIECES. I'm so glad there an option to fight back/revenge. That it, I'm gonna play revenge route first to revenge for her family dead before romancing ToT
Damn it was bloody brilliant. Great demo, was sad for MC but glad she gets to fight back. Can't wait for more. Oh quick question, will the king be a RO/LI?
Luceris is not an RO, the situation would be frankly distasteful as he is more than 20 years older than MC at the beginning, killed their family, and kidnapped them.
I wondered about that, too. The romanceable characters are only starting to get more room in the story at the current end of the demo - which isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong :) But yeah, I had the impression of Luceris being like a secret RO, too 😅 Simply cause their interactions are many plus pretty intense and I guess thats the reason Luceris tends to leave a heavier impression at the moment 😊
This is absolutely one of my all time favorite games to come back to. Little changes I make through each playthrough shift my gameplay and it's always a new experience; I adore it! Keep up the amazing work, man, this is top tier work !! much love from the South 💕
i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
I'm only on the first chapter so far, but Iove this so much. The story is a interesting, the writing is chef's kiss. The prologue made me sob. I'm so angry at the situation, everytime someone opens their mouth I fanna swing at them. The injustice and frustration feels very real. 😭 but anyway shsh I know it's gonna be a great journey! (It's also my first interactive game, so thank you for setting the bar high!!)
Edit: Okay, I read the second chapter and all the characters are so good!! I can't choose which one I wanna interact with more!
i love this so muchhhhhhh, it was so full of emotions ahhh, good job and very well written! i wanted to ask tho, how many chapters will this have? and when will thhe next chapter come out_:D
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out since I'm planning on adding more content to the current demo.
Since chapter 3 has another timeskip to when MC is 18-20, I decided on adding playable short stories that are set before it mainly because I want MC's relationships with the others to have more substance.
I want to include options for MC to have a childhood crush on either Hunter or Fadiya. Due to the timeskips it would feel rather out of nowhere if I didn't include some content in between the timeskips.
This is truly one of my most highly anticipated WIPs! The story begins with an absolutely heartbreaking event, and the author, Coeur, doesn’t skim over the resulting emotional devastation. The two available chapters (and prologue) focus on world building and developing an MC with intense emotions/motivations, while introducing the key ROs in a way that feels natural to the cadence of the story. It is a WIP, so there are some unpolished bits, but I am really looking forward to this IF’s development! The creator has a clear voice and a powerful story to tell, and I really think they have what it takes to make this one of the greats. <3
This is so sweet. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your experience playing my IF! Your anticipation and attention mean the world to me. Your support is invaluable, and I'll strive to polish and enhance the experience even further. Thank you again for believing in the story I'm striving to tell. 💗
I truly love this whole game so far. I'm making my character not trusting anyone (expect for my queen fadiya <3). Maybe it's my trust issues seeping into the game LOL.
The play got me messed up. Should I regret burning the dead queen room? Most likely yes. But it was very satisfying. And future character can deal with actions and let present self have their moment.
After having the game recommended to me by a friend, I intended only to skim through it. However, upon reading it and discovering a fresh new chapter, I felt compelled to express my admiration to the author.
To begin, I find the premise of the story to be quite intriguing. Refreshingly, it avoids the common clichés found in many similar works. The level of mystery present from the outset is enough to engage the reader without overwhelming or confusing them.
The characters are well developed, and their interactions are both complex and diverse. Despite being only a 9-year-old, the young protagonist maintains the decorum and pettiness befitting of royalty. However, the occasional reminder of their youth leaves the reader with a nuanced and relatable character.
The overall writing style is poetic and eloquent, carrying the story along like a gentle breeze. It is easy to lose oneself in the world created by the author.
In short, I found this story to be highly enjoyable and believe that it has great potential. I eagerly anticipate further updates from the author and would like to offer my kudos for their excellent work. I also want to apologise for such a lengthy comment. I'm really passionate when it comes to expressing what I liked about this type of work and wanted to show my excitement. I will also have to admit my friend has friend has found a hidden gem. (If you see this, no, you didn't. lmaoo).
Woah, are you sure you're not a writer yourself? Thank you very much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹 I hope I can continue delivering content worthy of your praise. 💗
The update was wonderful, I cried a few times and the characters are so wonderful :D (Lancelot as dad figure, I love that so much x3) and the RO's are amazing, thank you so much <3
This is really good! i really enjoyed playing it! tho i have run into a problem, i can't seem to write my own name? i couldn't in the character creator but, the problem comes mainly since i decided to stay with Hunter, Heilon and Vincent during the festival and i can't continue.. Any idea as to what i can do to fix this? XD
Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far 🥰 When you click the box that says insert your own name, do you scroll down? Because you have to scroll down to see the box where you have to write it then click confirm name.
If you are on mobile, you could also try using desktop mode in your browser.
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omgg i love this
VINCENT HAS MY HEARTTT IDK BRO SUM ABT HIMMM
I must say I found it a bit ridiculous when Luceris made our 9-year-old MC the new queen simply out of revenge against their sister. Considering that a child with no family in an enemy country really doesn't have the right to say "no", the story development actually makes sense, but things still frustrate me a little when there's a refuse option here and it doesn't really make sense.
I hate this sick king, yes, and can't wait for revenge :) looking forward to the updates and seeing what good stories you bring us!
I read again because so good :O and I don't want vengeance well I think best way to go live as best you can and rub it in their face because your better than them and you will not go down that route like they did :D >.> and my guy to be in love with the kings son :D
Shipping them both has me giggling and crying. The angst of it all. MC's jaded personality in contrast with his optimistic one. Has me wanting to crawl into the covers and die T_T
Right DX but I just want to be kind and cuddle him and not let go lol
If I had some money in the bank, I would seriously tip you for 10$. I loved your story, I loved your characters. I came from choices and signed up just to wait for this story to be updated. and I'm looking forward to it.🥰😍
All I want is to go back to my country and, hopefully, rebuild or at the very least live there anonymously for a time then travel the world. Basically leaving this enemy country is my revenge+healing. I want the king or "Emperor" or whatever to live (but I feel like he'd have to die for me to leave his country) so he suffers to his death with the same unquenchable love.
I'm utterly cold to anyone who has anything to do with the fall of my country, except for that one soldier who fed me non-stop. Courteous, cautiously, with Lancelot and people who show favorability to me but that's where I draw the line. I know they are good people, but I hate them (Yet, somehow, my stats show that I'm "Charming". Interesting, I suppose not being rude helps. Also, I feel so sad, the 9 yo I played was so mature it was unsettling but that's life for ya.)
I want to leave this place. Use the knowledge they give me while training to be a royal consort to further my older brother's research if possible and don't look back. If nothing else I could make a living with my "royal" IQ, right? xD
Omg, This has become my new favorite IF. Its such an amazing story and the writing is spectacular. It got me so emotional ToT. The need for VENGEANCE is strong. Can't wait to see what the story has in store!
Also hope Luceris enjoys the gift. Totally felt satisfying 😌
I LOVE THIS GAME!! The entire game got me feeling emotions so strong I started weeping in my dad's office in front of his co-workers so that was an experience! I love how you write emotions— especially anger and grief.
1. King Luceris, I will make you perish in a heart beat and watch as the life BLEEDS from your eyes with bliss. It is on SIGHT.
Romance be dammed (just kidding, literally in love with Hunter he's so sweet omgg)
2. Vincent- shut up yo ass up, everytime he (or any other ignorant *ssh*les) starts talking sh*t I feel a needle poking mockingly at my brain and it makes me yearn for sweet scrumptious revenge.
3. Fadiya's great— I wanna give her a hug and a kiss on the forehead (—3—)💕 (platonically)
4. Lancelot kinda made me angry but I decided to warm up to him so MC doesn't have a short number of people to seek comfort and safety from. Though, Lancelot won't technically be enough to replace MC's former dad, I still wanna see MC and Lancelot having a father/child dynamic. He's a chill guy:D
Questions- do we get more Lancelot lore?👀 and do we get the option to be a little shit and and fuck around just to give Vincent an aneurysm cuz I'm pretty like that? >:)
Anyways have a good day!^^
Thank you so much for your kind words! 💗
You will get more Lancelot lore in forms of side stories (that will be on a different file so not this page) and in his codex page which will come with Chapter 3!
And yes, you will get plenty of chances to fuck around. 😉
I hope you have a good day as well! 💗
The feeling of having your entire life taken from you, and having the chance to do it unto others....will I crave vengeance, or walk the higher road? or Will I pick both!?
I love it~ Thanks for the hard work, you can really feel the emotions of the characters, I like that there are options to give in to the urge of vengeance, but then backing off and being rational, really well written~
Can't wait for more!
I'm literally crying at 3 am rn.
THIS IS SO SAD AND AND MY HEART BROKE INTO PIECES. I'm so glad there an option to fight back/revenge. That it, I'm gonna play revenge route first to revenge for her family dead before romancing ToT
This is so good! I love this soo much! one question, will there be a love triangle? (I'm kind of into those things)
Thank you! 💗 A love triangle isn't in the plans.
Damn it was bloody brilliant. Great demo, was sad for MC but glad she gets to fight back. Can't wait for more. Oh quick question, will the king be a RO/LI?
Thank you! 💗
Luceris is not an RO, the situation would be frankly distasteful as he is more than 20 years older than MC at the beginning, killed their family, and kidnapped them.
Good to know. I was just curious.
I wondered about that, too. The romanceable characters are only starting to get more room in the story at the current end of the demo - which isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong :) But yeah, I had the impression of Luceris being like a secret RO, too 😅 Simply cause their interactions are many plus pretty intense and I guess thats the reason Luceris tends to leave a heavier impression at the moment 😊
This is absolutely one of my all time favorite games to come back to. Little changes I make through each playthrough shift my gameplay and it's always a new experience; I adore it! Keep up the amazing work, man, this is top tier work !! much love from the South 💕
Thank you so much! 💗
i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Dae! Thank you for your kind words. 🥹💗
Happy New Year Luceris!!
“Happy new year, Your Majesty~”
a song to my ears... i want TO bURN it aLL
chapter 2 doesn't exist for me even though i've updated :(
Did you make a new save, as in restart from the beginning? If you didn't then you should since the old saves don't work.
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
It's okay, I don't need my heart anyway 🥹 BUT AAAA I REALLY HOPE MC WILL BE HAPPY 😭
Hopefully someday they'll be happy! 💗
Loved the new chapter! Following you on Tumblr and can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing with us 💕
So happy you enjoyed the new chapter, thank you for your support! 💗
looks like i found my new obsession :p its soooo good, i feel blessed to be able to read this haha
Aaa thank you! Glad to be the source of your entertainment. 💗
Hey, so I am liking the story style. Would it be okay if I used it for mine? I am terrible at coding things like css and yours is gorgeou
Sure! Just don't do the same colors please :)
Awesome, thanks bunches!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It ended D: IT was so good I love it! I want to hug the mc and tell them it will get better I just want them to be happy Q,Q
Thank you! MC truly deserves better :(
They really do D: *hugs mc*
This is a pure gem, i love it! I can't wait for the next chapters!
Thank you!
I'm only on the first chapter so far, but Iove this so much. The story is a interesting, the writing is chef's kiss. The prologue made me sob. I'm so angry at the situation, everytime someone opens their mouth I fanna swing at them. The injustice and frustration feels very real. 😭 but anyway shsh I know it's gonna be a great journey! (It's also my first interactive game, so thank you for setting the bar high!!)
Edit: Okay, I read the second chapter and all the characters are so good!! I can't choose which one I wanna interact with more!
Aaaaa omg I'm so happy you enjoyed it! 😭 So honored that this IF is your first and that you had a good experience 🫶
i love this so muchhhhhhh, it was so full of emotions ahhh, good job and very well written! i wanted to ask tho, how many chapters will this have? and when will thhe next chapter come out_:D
Thank you so much! 💗
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out since I'm planning on adding more content to the current demo.
Since chapter 3 has another timeskip to when MC is 18-20, I decided on adding playable short stories that are set before it mainly because I want MC's relationships with the others to have more substance.
I want to include options for MC to have a childhood crush on either Hunter or Fadiya. Due to the timeskips it would feel rather out of nowhere if I didn't include some content in between the timeskips.
Totally understandable, thank you for you time and keep up the good work!!
NEED MORE D:(
anyway the story so good! wishing for more interactions with Helios bc he is my cute lil patootie :3
Thank you so much! 💗
This is truly one of my most highly anticipated WIPs! The story begins with an absolutely heartbreaking event, and the author, Coeur, doesn’t skim over the resulting emotional devastation. The two available chapters (and prologue) focus on world building and developing an MC with intense emotions/motivations, while introducing the key ROs in a way that feels natural to the cadence of the story. It is a WIP, so there are some unpolished bits, but I am really looking forward to this IF’s development! The creator has a clear voice and a powerful story to tell, and I really think they have what it takes to make this one of the greats. <3
This is so sweet. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your experience playing my IF! Your anticipation and attention mean the world to me. Your support is invaluable, and I'll strive to polish and enhance the experience even further. Thank you again for believing in the story I'm striving to tell. 💗
I truly love this whole game so far. I'm making my character not trusting anyone (expect for my queen fadiya <3). Maybe it's my trust issues seeping into the game LOL.
The play got me messed up. Should I regret burning the dead queen room? Most likely yes. But it was very satisfying. And future character can deal with actions and let present self have their moment.
Thank you so much 🥹🥹💗
This game had me up sobbing at 3 am </3
Mission accomplished 🥰
THIS WAS SO GOOD AHHHH I WANNA EAT IT I LOVED ITTTT
THANK YOUUU! Makes me very happy that you enjoyed it 💗
After having the game recommended to me by a friend, I intended only to skim through it. However, upon reading it and discovering a fresh new chapter, I felt compelled to express my admiration to the author.
To begin, I find the premise of the story to be quite intriguing. Refreshingly, it avoids the common clichés found in many similar works. The level of mystery present from the outset is enough to engage the reader without overwhelming or confusing them.
The characters are well developed, and their interactions are both complex and diverse. Despite being only a 9-year-old, the young protagonist maintains the decorum and pettiness befitting of royalty. However, the occasional reminder of their youth leaves the reader with a nuanced and relatable character.
The overall writing style is poetic and eloquent, carrying the story along like a gentle breeze. It is easy to lose oneself in the world created by the author.
In short, I found this story to be highly enjoyable and believe that it has great potential. I eagerly anticipate further updates from the author and would like to offer my kudos for their excellent work. I also want to apologise for such a lengthy comment. I'm really passionate when it comes to expressing what I liked about this type of work and wanted to show my excitement. I will also have to admit my friend has friend has found a hidden gem. (If you see this, no, you didn't. lmaoo).
Woah, are you sure you're not a writer yourself? Thank you very much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹 I hope I can continue delivering content worthy of your praise. 💗
I just found this and omg im crying (／_;)/💕💕
I hope you enjoyed it! 💗
The update was wonderful, I cried a few times and the characters are so wonderful :D (Lancelot as dad figure, I love that so much x3) and the RO's are amazing, thank you so much <3
Thank you so much 🥹🥹 I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for updating! Loved the update and Vincent <3
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I love Vincent too 🫶
omg i meant Hunter but i wrote out the wrong name xD loved Vincent's part too <3 I am looking forward to see how all the dynamics develop :D
Thank you! 💗
Vincent <3 that is all. Lol no, I really love it so far :o and what an ending! I can't wait for chapter 3. This is one of my favourite IF games!
Thank you so much omg 🥹🥹 That's such high praise
This is really good! i really enjoyed playing it! tho i have run into a problem, i can't seem to write my own name? i couldn't in the character creator but, the problem comes mainly since i decided to stay with Hunter, Heilon and Vincent during the festival and i can't continue.. Any idea as to what i can do to fix this? XD
Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far 🥰 When you click the box that says insert your own name, do you scroll down? Because you have to scroll down to see the box where you have to write it then click confirm name.
If you are on mobile, you could also try using desktop mode in your browser.
I love this story! Poor MC tho. :(
I personally blame the sister as much as Luceris. Gonna give her lil talk when I meet her.
I'm so happy you loved it! 💗 Unfortunately, this whole thing is a wild cycle of violence.
Oh my God!!!!!! It's back, I cannot believe it! Can't wait to play the second chapter. I'm sure it's as good as the previous one and the Prologue.
Let me know what you think after you play it! 🥰
Surely will do!
(I have finished the second chapter!)
The chapter was very dramatic and well written.
I already like how our MC has different options for dealing with the pain and lost.
The characters are charismatic in their own way and we genuinely feel what our MC feels. I'm very curious about the new update!