i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
I'm only on the first chapter so far, but Iove this so much. The story is a interesting, the writing is chef's kiss. The prologue made me sob. I'm so angry at the situation, everytime someone opens their mouth I fanna swing at them. The injustice and frustration feels very real. 😭 but anyway shsh I know it's gonna be a great journey! (It's also my first interactive game, so thank you for setting the bar high!!)
Edit: Okay, I read the second chapter and all the characters are so good!! I can't choose which one I wanna interact with more!
i love this so muchhhhhhh, it was so full of emotions ahhh, good job and very well written! i wanted to ask tho, how many chapters will this have? and when will thhe next chapter come out_:D
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out since I'm planning on adding more content to the current demo.
Since chapter 3 has another timeskip to when MC is 18-20, I decided on adding playable short stories that are set before it mainly because I want MC's relationships with the others to have more substance.
I want to include options for MC to have a childhood crush on either Hunter or Fadiya. Due to the timeskips it would feel rather out of nowhere if I didn't include some content in between the timeskips.
This is truly one of my most highly anticipated WIPs! The story begins with an absolutely heartbreaking event, and the author, Coeur, doesn’t skim over the resulting emotional devastation. The two available chapters (and prologue) focus on world building and developing an MC with intense emotions/motivations, while introducing the key ROs in a way that feels natural to the cadence of the story. It is a WIP, so there are some unpolished bits, but I am really looking forward to this IF’s development! The creator has a clear voice and a powerful story to tell, and I really think they have what it takes to make this one of the greats. <3
This is so sweet. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your experience playing my IF! Your anticipation and attention mean the world to me. Your support is invaluable, and I'll strive to polish and enhance the experience even further. Thank you again for believing in the story I'm striving to tell. 💗
I truly love this whole game so far. I'm making my character not trusting anyone (expect for my queen fadiya <3). Maybe it's my trust issues seeping into the game LOL.
The play got me messed up. Should I regret burning the dead queen room? Most likely yes. But it was very satisfying. And future character can deal with actions and let present self have their moment.
After having the game recommended to me by a friend, I intended only to skim through it. However, upon reading it and discovering a fresh new chapter, I felt compelled to express my admiration to the author.
To begin, I find the premise of the story to be quite intriguing. Refreshingly, it avoids the common clichés found in many similar works. The level of mystery present from the outset is enough to engage the reader without overwhelming or confusing them.
The characters are well developed, and their interactions are both complex and diverse. Despite being only a 9-year-old, the young protagonist maintains the decorum and pettiness befitting of royalty. However, the occasional reminder of their youth leaves the reader with a nuanced and relatable character.
The overall writing style is poetic and eloquent, carrying the story along like a gentle breeze. It is easy to lose oneself in the world created by the author.
In short, I found this story to be highly enjoyable and believe that it has great potential. I eagerly anticipate further updates from the author and would like to offer my kudos for their excellent work. I also want to apologise for such a lengthy comment. I'm really passionate when it comes to expressing what I liked about this type of work and wanted to show my excitement. I will also have to admit my friend has friend has found a hidden gem. (If you see this, no, you didn't. lmaoo).
Woah, are you sure you're not a writer yourself? Thank you very much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹 I hope I can continue delivering content worthy of your praise. 💗
The update was wonderful, I cried a few times and the characters are so wonderful :D (Lancelot as dad figure, I love that so much x3) and the RO's are amazing, thank you so much <3
This is really good! i really enjoyed playing it! tho i have run into a problem, i can't seem to write my own name? i couldn't in the character creator but, the problem comes mainly since i decided to stay with Hunter, Heilon and Vincent during the festival and i can't continue.. Any idea as to what i can do to fix this? XD
Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far 🥰 When you click the box that says insert your own name, do you scroll down? Because you have to scroll down to see the box where you have to write it then click confirm name.
If you are on mobile, you could also try using desktop mode in your browser.
Lmao raise your hand if the hatred you feel for Luceris burns hotter than the fiery pits of hell~ I’m only half joking. If this man was dying of thirst and I had a glass of water, I would smile, look him in the eyes, and pour every last drop into the ground. Great story, exceptional writing. :)
But fr i love the setting and the way the mc’s past is set out, theres so much mystery surrounding Luceris’ past too and I cant wait to find out more about the whole cast. Its all just set perfectly❤️❤️
If i may offer stylistic adive: divide your long sentences into smaller ones to help with pacing for reading. F.e., you have sentences with 5-6 clauses, they easily can be split into 2-3 sentences.
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i love this so much! i literally cried for the mc when it finally sank in that they wouldn't see her brother ever again. damn, i am straight up sobbing. this was so well written. that cliff hanger was fire!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Dae! Thank you for your kind words. 🥹💗
Happy New Year Luceris!!
“Happy new year, Your Majesty~”
a song to my ears... i want TO bURN it aLL
chapter 2 doesn't exist for me even though i've updated :(
Did you make a new save, as in restart from the beginning? If you didn't then you should since the old saves don't work.
i read the ch2 update that you released 11 days ago. but it also says you updated 1 day ago .. is that a legit update (since my saves are gone *sad face*) or is it the same new update from 11 days ago? asking so i can avoid an all cry fest again. that beginning gets me every fckn time lol and it is only 8:30am lol every time im a blubbering mess lol
It is the same as 11 days ago, if there was a new update I'd make a devlog about it! I just fixed some choices that were leading to the wrong passages.
I advice you to download the saves so they don't disappear.
It's okay, I don't need my heart anyway 🥹 BUT AAAA I REALLY HOPE MC WILL BE HAPPY 😭
Hopefully someday they'll be happy! 💗
Loved the new chapter! Following you on Tumblr and can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing with us 💕
So happy you enjoyed the new chapter, thank you for your support! 💗
looks like i found my new obsession :p its soooo good, i feel blessed to be able to read this haha
Aaa thank you! Glad to be the source of your entertainment. 💗
Hey, so I am liking the story style. Would it be okay if I used it for mine? I am terrible at coding things like css and yours is gorgeou
Sure! Just don't do the same colors please :)
Awesome, thanks bunches!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It ended D: IT was so good I love it! I want to hug the mc and tell them it will get better I just want them to be happy Q,Q
Thank you! MC truly deserves better :(
They really do D: *hugs mc*
This is a pure gem, i love it! I can't wait for the next chapters!
Thank you!
I'm only on the first chapter so far, but Iove this so much. The story is a interesting, the writing is chef's kiss. The prologue made me sob. I'm so angry at the situation, everytime someone opens their mouth I fanna swing at them. The injustice and frustration feels very real. 😭 but anyway shsh I know it's gonna be a great journey! (It's also my first interactive game, so thank you for setting the bar high!!)
Edit: Okay, I read the second chapter and all the characters are so good!! I can't choose which one I wanna interact with more!
Aaaaa omg I'm so happy you enjoyed it! 😭 So honored that this IF is your first and that you had a good experience 🫶
i love this so muchhhhhhh, it was so full of emotions ahhh, good job and very well written! i wanted to ask tho, how many chapters will this have? and when will thhe next chapter come out_:D
Thank you so much! 💗
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out since I'm planning on adding more content to the current demo.
Since chapter 3 has another timeskip to when MC is 18-20, I decided on adding playable short stories that are set before it mainly because I want MC's relationships with the others to have more substance.
I want to include options for MC to have a childhood crush on either Hunter or Fadiya. Due to the timeskips it would feel rather out of nowhere if I didn't include some content in between the timeskips.
Totally understandable, thank you for you time and keep up the good work!!
NEED MORE D:(
anyway the story so good! wishing for more interactions with Helios bc he is my cute lil patootie :3
Thank you so much! 💗
This is truly one of my most highly anticipated WIPs! The story begins with an absolutely heartbreaking event, and the author, Coeur, doesn’t skim over the resulting emotional devastation. The two available chapters (and prologue) focus on world building and developing an MC with intense emotions/motivations, while introducing the key ROs in a way that feels natural to the cadence of the story. It is a WIP, so there are some unpolished bits, but I am really looking forward to this IF’s development! The creator has a clear voice and a powerful story to tell, and I really think they have what it takes to make this one of the greats. <3
This is so sweet. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your experience playing my IF! Your anticipation and attention mean the world to me. Your support is invaluable, and I'll strive to polish and enhance the experience even further. Thank you again for believing in the story I'm striving to tell. 💗
I truly love this whole game so far. I'm making my character not trusting anyone (expect for my queen fadiya <3). Maybe it's my trust issues seeping into the game LOL.
The play got me messed up. Should I regret burning the dead queen room? Most likely yes. But it was very satisfying. And future character can deal with actions and let present self have their moment.
Thank you so much 🥹🥹💗
This game had me up sobbing at 3 am </3
Mission accomplished 🥰
THIS WAS SO GOOD AHHHH I WANNA EAT IT I LOVED ITTTT
THANK YOUUU! Makes me very happy that you enjoyed it 💗
After having the game recommended to me by a friend, I intended only to skim through it. However, upon reading it and discovering a fresh new chapter, I felt compelled to express my admiration to the author.
To begin, I find the premise of the story to be quite intriguing. Refreshingly, it avoids the common clichés found in many similar works. The level of mystery present from the outset is enough to engage the reader without overwhelming or confusing them.
The characters are well developed, and their interactions are both complex and diverse. Despite being only a 9-year-old, the young protagonist maintains the decorum and pettiness befitting of royalty. However, the occasional reminder of their youth leaves the reader with a nuanced and relatable character.
The overall writing style is poetic and eloquent, carrying the story along like a gentle breeze. It is easy to lose oneself in the world created by the author.
In short, I found this story to be highly enjoyable and believe that it has great potential. I eagerly anticipate further updates from the author and would like to offer my kudos for their excellent work. I also want to apologise for such a lengthy comment. I'm really passionate when it comes to expressing what I liked about this type of work and wanted to show my excitement. I will also have to admit my friend has friend has found a hidden gem. (If you see this, no, you didn't. lmaoo).
Woah, are you sure you're not a writer yourself? Thank you very much for your kind words 🥹🥹🥹 I hope I can continue delivering content worthy of your praise. 💗
I just found this and omg im crying (／_;)/💕💕
I hope you enjoyed it! 💗
The update was wonderful, I cried a few times and the characters are so wonderful :D (Lancelot as dad figure, I love that so much x3) and the RO's are amazing, thank you so much <3
Thank you so much 🥹🥹 I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for updating! Loved the update and Vincent <3
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I love Vincent too 🫶
omg i meant Hunter but i wrote out the wrong name xD loved Vincent's part too <3 I am looking forward to see how all the dynamics develop :D
Thank you! 💗
Vincent <3 that is all. Lol no, I really love it so far :o and what an ending! I can't wait for chapter 3. This is one of my favourite IF games!
Thank you so much omg 🥹🥹 That's such high praise
This is really good! i really enjoyed playing it! tho i have run into a problem, i can't seem to write my own name? i couldn't in the character creator but, the problem comes mainly since i decided to stay with Hunter, Heilon and Vincent during the festival and i can't continue.. Any idea as to what i can do to fix this? XD
Hi! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far 🥰 When you click the box that says insert your own name, do you scroll down? Because you have to scroll down to see the box where you have to write it then click confirm name.
If you are on mobile, you could also try using desktop mode in your browser.
I love this story! Poor MC tho. :(
I personally blame the sister as much as Luceris. Gonna give her lil talk when I meet her.
I'm so happy you loved it! 💗 Unfortunately, this whole thing is a wild cycle of violence.
Oh my God!!!!!! It's back, I cannot believe it! Can't wait to play the second chapter. I'm sure it's as good as the previous one and the Prologue.
Let me know what you think after you play it! 🥰
Surely will do!
(I have finished the second chapter!)
The chapter was very dramatic and well written.
I already like how our MC has different options for dealing with the pain and lost.
The characters are charismatic in their own way and we genuinely feel what our MC feels. I'm very curious about the new update!
So many emotions in your writing, I love it. Can't wait for chapter 3. 5/5
Thank you so much! 💗
Lmao raise your hand if the hatred you feel for Luceris burns hotter than the fiery pits of hell~ I’m only half joking. If this man was dying of thirst and I had a glass of water, I would smile, look him in the eyes, and pour every last drop into the ground. Great story, exceptional writing. :)
Lmao 😭😭 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.💗
AHHHH YOU DID IT AGAIN IM HOOKED ONCE MOREEE
chapter 2 was so beautiful, your writing is beautiful, the characters are beautiful THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD
Aaaa thank you so much for your kind words 🥹🥹 I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!
AAAA I JUST LOVE YOUR WRITING SM!! Every moment is full of emotions for me, and i enjoy that sm!
But fr i love the setting and the way the mc’s past is set out, theres so much mystery surrounding Luceris’ past too and I cant wait to find out more about the whole cast. Its all just set perfectly❤️❤️
Thank you so much 🥹🥹 It makes me very happy that you like it!
If i may offer stylistic adive: divide your long sentences into smaller ones to help with pacing for reading. F.e., you have sentences with 5-6 clauses, they easily can be split into 2-3 sentences.
Thank you for the feedback!
First of all, great story.
Second of all, Luceris is a sick bastard and I'm going to kill him.
Thank you! 💗
is there a dark setting? The white ones suck the eyes right outta my head.
Hi, dark mode will be coming on the next update which is on the 28th!
This was a terrific story! The prologue and chapter 1 was great — can't wait for the next chapter (but take your time!) ⸜(*ˊᗜˋ*)⸝💛
Thank you so much! 💗 The next update comes on the 28th.
The story is so good! I love this, keep it up! <3
Thank you so much!
omg the things I’ll do to play this for the first time again,, this was beautiful!
Can’t wait for chapter 2, keep it up 👍 you’re absolutely amazing :DD
Thank you so much!
Please don't say that I'm the only one because every time I come here, I look at this IF and think, "Now that's what a masterpiece looks like" 😮💨✨.
I'm sorry, like mate?
You can't possibly not adore this 😭
That’s very sweet of you 😭😭💗 Thank you so much!
NO! Thank you so much for this IF ✨😭❤️
I loved the demo, you're a amazing writer and i really look forward to see where the story goes :)
Thank you! 💗
NO I NEED MORE
And what tha hell was that in the end i want to refuse >:(
Good game by the way
Ps: i wish i could just ignore or punch people when they talk about your familiy
Kinda like they are talking about your dead family you know and most of them are just rude so violence is tha wae
Thank you! 💗